[WordPlay Word-zine] Write "Where Water Comes Together with Other Water"

Published: Mon, 10/09/17


The WordPlay Word-zine
Volume VI, Issue 41
October 9, 2017
Word of the Week: water
Dear ,

Do you find yourself, like me, revitalized by a walk beside an ocean, lake, river, or stream?

What is there about being by a body of water that does so much for our spirits, and our creativity?

Maybe it's as simple, and physical, as the abundance of negative ions. (Which would explain why many of us get so many ideas for our writing, or have an aha solution to a thorny problem, while in a shower or bathtub.)

I invite you to treat yourself to some time by a favorite body of water. Take your writing (or other creative project) with you, or your thorniest problems, and drink in the sight, the sound, yes, the negative ions. See if it doesn't make you feel renewed, and perhaps even finding yourself writing a litany to water, as Raymond Carver does in this week's featured writing, "Where Water Comes Together with Other Water." (I'll always be grateful to my friend, mentor, and teacher Irene Blair Honeycutt for introducing me to Raymond Carver's work. I bet you will enjoy it, too.)

And I also invite you, if you can, to join me at Sunset Beach November 10-12 or 17-19 for a Coastal Writing Retreat

November is a wonderful time to be at the shore, and it doesn't get any more beautiful. See for yourself—I took this photo on one of my evening walks.

We'll write together, unless you'd rather write on your own. We'll check out sunset from the Sunset Beach Pier (my treat!), unless you'd rather walk on the beach in your own good company, or take a nap, or write some more. (Yes, this IS a theme. You can hang out with me and the other participants, or hang out with yourself and your writingwhatever suits your fancy in the moment. And, regardless, I'll provide resources that will help you move forward with your writing goals and dreams.

I'd love to share one of my favorite places in the world with you. And whether or not you can come, I'd love you to share one of your favorite bodies of water with me and other WordPlayers by posting on www.facebook.com/wordplaynow.

And do get yourself to some water soon, to drink in, as Raymond Carver says in "Where Water Comes Together with Other Water," "the music they make," to nurture yourself and your creativity.
 
Love and light,

Maureen

Upcoming WordPlay



​​​​​​​ COASTAL WRITING RETREATS
Connect with Your Creativity at the Sunset Inn
(Writing—and more—as Renewal and Inspiration) 

Due to response, this retreat will be offered on two different weekends: November 10th – 12th and November 17th – 19th.
Pick the dates that work best for you.

Renew yourself and reconnect with your own creativity, whether you are a practicing writer, closet writer, or as-yet-to-pick-up-the-pen writer! The techniques and prompts we’ll use will spur your imagination, and can be used to create nonfiction, fiction, and/or poetry—the choice is yours.

$418 + room tax for the weekend beginning either Friday, November 10th through Sunday November 12th or Friday, November 17th through Sunday, November 19th. The Coastal Writing Retreat includes writing sessions, two nights’ lodging, two breakfasts and Saturday lunch (hotel tax and Saturday dinner at a local restaurant not included).

Want to extend your retreat? If you’d like to stay another day to write, or to just enjoy the beach, the Inn is offering Coastal Writing Retreat participants the opportunity to stay Sunday night at half price.

(Extra writing retreat sessions are a possibility too. Email info@wordplaynow.com if you’re interested.)

WHEREThe Sunset Inn, 9 North Shore Dr., Sunset Beach, NC 28468 
WHEN: Friday, November 10th – Sunday, November 12th, 2017
~ and also ~ Friday, November 17th – Sunday, November 19th, 2017

TO REGISTER: Contact the Sunset Inn at 888.575.1001 or 910.575.1000 (if you would like to handpick your room, view your choices here first, then call). Because the Inn is holding rooms for our retreat participants, a number of them are blocked off as unavailable online. Phone to check on your choice.

*Also, please let the Inn know when you call if you are interested in staying Sunday night, November 12th or 19th, at half price. The Inn will hold your reservation with a credit card.




More WordPlay opportunities here.
 
Featured Writer


Raymond Carver
 
Photo courtesy of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raymond_Carver
Bio courtesy of http://pencol.edu/raymond-carver-festival/raymond-carver-biography

American short story writer and poet Raymond Carver was born in Clatskanie, Oregon, in 1938 and died in Port Angeles, Washington, in 1988. Very few writers have been more influential on future generations of American and international authors. Carver played a major role in reviving the American short story form in the 1980s, and he has been referred to as one of the “greatest modern short story writers” and as “the American Chekhov”...Though he may be best known for his eight books of short fiction, he also wrote essays, plays, a screenplay, reviews, introductions, and seven books of poetry.  Ten films have been adapted from his stories....


Carver married and had two children shortly after his high school graduation and made his living in a series of menial jobs.... Like the characters in his fiction and poetry, who often struggled with alcoholism, divorce, or bankruptcy, Carver’s family life was difficult, and the strain eventually unraveled his first marriage.  Unlike many of his characters, who are not quite able to put their feelings into words, Carver was able to tap into the kind of suffering he had lived and observed and ultimately to relate these conflicts to readers in his carefully crafted and highly realistic stories and poems.  


After multiple hospitalizations due to severe alcoholism, Carver finally confronted his addiction starting in 1977....His sobriety date was June 2, 1977.  In 1977, he also met the poet Tess Gallagher and began a relationship with her that would continue until his death.... In 1983, ... Carver received the Mildred and Harold Strauss award [that] required that he quit teaching and devote himself fully to writing.... This timely award, Carver's sobriety, and his companioning by the writer Tess Gallagher, who became his wife June 17, 1988, allowed him to become incredibly prolific in his final years. Raymond Carver lost his battle with lung cancer in 1988.

 
Featured Writing



Where Water Comes Together
with Other Water
 
by
 
Raymond Carver



I love creeks and the music they make.
And rills, in glades and meadows, before
they have a chance to become creeks.
I may even love them best of all
for their secrecy. I almost forgot
to say something about the source!
Can anything be more wonderful than a spring?
But the big streams have my heart too.
And the places streams flow into rivers.
The open mouths of rivers where they join the sea.
The places where water comes together
with other water. Those places stand out
in my mind like holy places....

 

                    ~ Raymond Carver

You can read "Where Water Comes Together with Other Water" in its entirety here.


WordPlay Now! Writing Prompt

This is WordPlayso why not revel in the power and potential of one good word after another? This week, it's "water."

PROMPT:

Write about water, whether it's a tribute to a particular body of water that is important to you/one of your characters (as Sunset Beach is to me), or a litany to places "where water comes together with other water," or a celebration of streams, ponds, waterfalls...

Or just include a body of water in a scene, story, essay, or poem. 



It's fun to play with prompts in community with fellow writers, and to be able to share the results when you're done. You can find out about WordPlay classes, workshops, and retreats here. 

MAUREEN RYAN GRIFFIN, an award-winning poetry and nonfiction writer, is the author of Spinning Words into Gold, a Hands-On Guide to the Craft of Writing, a grief workbook entitled I Will Never Forget You, and three collections of poetry, Ten Thousand Cicadas Can't Be Wrong, This Scatter of Blossoms and When the Leaves Are in the Water. One of her long-held dreams came true in July of 2015 when Garrison Keillor read one of her poems on The Writer's Almanac. She believes, as author Julia Cameron says, "We are meant to midwife dreams for one another."

Maureen also believes that serious "word work" requires serious WordPlay, as play is how we humans best learn—and perform. What she loves best is witnessing all the other dreams that come true for her clients along the way. Language, when used with intentionality and focus, is, after all, serious fuel for joy. Here's to yours!

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Maureen Ryan Griffin
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