[WordPlay Word-zine] Are you "divinely dissatisfied"?

Published: Mon, 05/02/16


The WordPlay Word-zine
Volume V, Issue 18
May 2, 2016
Word of the Week: dissatisfaction
Dear ,


What, me? Dissatisfied? Well, aren't we all, at least from time to time? No doubt one of the reasons this classic Rolling Stones song was such a hit.

What inspired me to use this particular word this week is the featured writing below, a selection from an inspiring article by Maria Popova that quotes from Agnes De Mille's book Martha: The Life and Work of Martha Graham- A Biography. Martha Graham's words about the "divine dissatisfaction" that all artists of all kinds experience resonated with me. My gratitude to WordPlayer Savannah Stoner for sharing this with our Thursday evening Under Construction class so that I could share it with you. (You can check out one of Savannah’s beautiful essays here on the WordPlay website.

I thought about this "divine dissatisfaction" yesterday while my sweetie Richard and I were strolling through Concord, NC's Memorial Gardens.

This is an absolutely lovely garden, with beauty at every turn, and Richard and I exclaimed to each other several times about the labor that must be put in to keep it so impeccably maintained. And then, around a corner, a saw a woman bending to pick up a small branchlet that had fallen on the path. 

"Ah," I said to her, "you're the one who keeps this garden so beautiful!"

She smiled with pleasure and told us that she was one of two full-time gardeners, and that another one came in on the weekends to lay down pine straw and other such tasks to give them time to do other tasks. "You just missed the tulips," she said. "There were 1,400 of them blooming."

"I saw them," I said. "Made me sad to see those empty stems."

"Come back in July," she said. "It's a whole new blooming season."

I didn't point out the small leaf on her cheek that added so to her charm, only thanked her and told her I would be back, with my journal next time, to sit by a fountain and write for a while.

Then off she went to do more work, clearly filled to the brim with the divine dissatisfaction that kept her so busy keeping this "best-kept secret in Concord" the haven it is.

What could you allow your own dissatisfaction to propel you to write and polish and share? 


Love and light (and a proper dose of divine dissatisfaction),

 
Maureen​

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Featured Writer



Agnes De Mille 
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Featured Writing
 
In 1943, De Mille was hired to choreograph the musical Oklahoma!, which became an overnight sensation and ran for a record-setting 2,212 performances. Feeling that critics and the public had long ignored work into which she had poured her heart and soul, De Mille found herself dispirited by the sense that something she considered "only fairly good" was suddenly hailed as a "flamboyant success." Shortly after the premiere, she met Graham "in a Schrafft's restaurant over a soda" for a conversation that put into perspective her gnawing grievance and offered what De Mille considered the greatest thing ever said to her. She recounts the exchange:

I confessed that I had a burning desire to be excellent, but no faith that I could be.

Martha said to me, very quietly: "There is a vitality, a life force, an energy, a quickening that is translated through you into action, and because there is only one of you in all of time, this expression is unique. And if you block it, it will never exist through any other medium and it will be lost. The world will not have it. It is not your business to determine how good it is nor how valuable nor how it compares with other expressions. It is your business to keep it yours clearly and directly, to keep the channel open. You do not even have to believe in yourself or your work.

You have to keep yourself open and aware to the urges that motivate you. Keep the channel open. As for you, Agnes, you have so far used about one-third of your talent."

"But," I said, "when I see my work I take for granted what other people value in it. I see only its ineptitude, inorganic flaws, and crudities. I am not pleased or satisfied."

"No artist is pleased."

"But then there is no satisfaction?"

"No satisfaction whatever at any time," she cried out passionately. "There is only a queer divine dissatisfaction, a blessed unrest that keeps us marching and makes us more alive than the others."


WordPlay Now! Writing Prompt

This is WordPlayso why not revel in the power and potential of one good word after another? This week, it's "dissatisfaction." 


PROMPT:​ 

Write about any kind of action, situation, or creation that you (or one of your characters) has been dissatisfied with, and what has (or could be gained) through this dissatisfaction. 

It's fun to play with prompts in community with fellow writers, and to be able to share the results when you're done. You can find out about WordPlay classes, workshops, and retreats here. 

MAUREEN RYAN GRIFFIN, an award-winning poetry and nonfiction writer, is the author of Spinning Words into Gold, a Hands-On Guide to the Craft of Writing, a grief workbook entitled I Will Never Forget You, and three collections of poetry, Ten Thousand Cicadas Can't Be Wrong, This Scatter of Blossoms and When the Leaves Are in the Water. One of her long-held dreams came true in July of 2015 when Garrison Keillor read one of her poems on The Writer's Almanac. She believes, as author Julia Cameron says, "We are meant to midwife dreams for one another."

Maureen also believes that serious "word work" requires serious WordPlay, as play is how we humans best learn—and perform. What she loves best is witnessing all the other dreams that come true for her clients along the way. Language, when used with intentionality and focus, is, after all, serious fuel for joy. Here's to yours!

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